love is a dog from hell

  1. cirerita

    "fog" (1st and 2nd drafts)

    Both versions were written within 4 days. The changes are substantial -and that's an understatement. Did he also change/revise "The Crunch"? :D It would be interesting to find the draft(s) of that poem to establish who made those changes.
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    • love is a dog from hell posthumous editing issues what matters most is how well you walk through the fire
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