A Painted Red Meep...

[APRM]

I see you smiling in your grave,
Picking insect and flakes of dry flesh from your teeth,
You were one beautiful darlin'
But I gotta say "I no longer wanna kiss you babe".

 

[Gerard K H Love]

Picking insect and flakes of dry flesh from your teeth

Now that sounds like something said after a ride on a motorcycle. A real biker would kiss her.

Welcome to the forum. We don't have too many insects but there are plenty of animals here.

 

[APRM]

We are all animals my friend, just the majority of humanity has forgotten that. I came across this place by chance really. My buddy was asking me what I was reading, and at the time it was a Bukowski book of poetry, he asked me about the animal, and I searched for answers, and thus I arrived at the gates of heaven...

 

[Father Luke]

I see you . . .

Nice.
Yours?

 

[APRM]

A very small tidbit of it, yes. Thanks.

 

[ROC]

Hi APRM.

Welcome.

Lose the quotation marks in the last line. They are unnecessary.
A comma after say would do it.

I hope you don't mind the observation.


And GKH Love... great quote! (The hooves of the horses...)

 

[james]

welcome. what is a meep?

 

[Bukfan]

Welcome aboard, APRM!

 

[chronic]

welcome. what is a meep?

A meep is just a peem that's lost its sense of direction.

 

[hoochmonkey9]

welcome. what is a meep?

I was curious so I looked it up here.

I'm still not sure what is is.

but, you know, that's fine. I don't have to know everything.

 

[APRM]

Thanks for the welcome all.

 

[Billville]

A meep is just a peem that's lost its sense of direction.

It's moments like this that make me proud to be a member! :cool:


Welcome aboard APRM

 

[the only good poet]

meep meep

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=KJJW7EF5aVk

 

[Gerard K H Love]

Excellent!

 

[esart]

meep is one of my favorite words!