Bullshit Pain: The Little Magazine: Vol. 6, No. 1, 1972

zobraks

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I know leg-humping Martin couldn't leave this one alone... (please, someone check me on that).
"The Editor" (or The Typist?) had changed a couple of nouns ("determination" instead of "velocity" and "density" instead of "monotony", "a total area" changed to "total areas"), and he threw out a couple of words he considered redundant, toyed with punctuation a little bit... the usual stuff.

On the bright side, he corrected "pharoah."
 
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