according to the database, the poem 'Sun Coming Down' was first printed in Harlequin - Vol. 2 - No. 1 - Page 11 - 1957 and then never again until after Hank's death.

From everything we know, I find it likely, that these posthumous versions have been 'changed'.
To verify this, we'd need a copy of the 'Harlequin'-issue. Does anybody have it?
 
I think I've only seen one or two copies of Harlequin. It isn't very common, but I'm sure someone here has it.
 
Here you go.

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The pint of wine is a glass, no slack bladder and bed wetting, no wine , no blood and no march of crushed insects. Shortened and cleaned. Weakened .
Snakes along my teeth? o_0o
 

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