Targets No. 15, 1963

Andreas

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The Days Run Away... was edited by Dorbin, who culled the poems from the littles and printed them verbatim.
I thought of ships, of armies, hanging on...must have been an exception.
2 flies however (collected in Play The Piano...) is identically equal to the Targets version.
 

mjp

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That one does have some familiar fingerprints on it, doesn't it.
 

Andreas

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Yes, it does. You called it poetry for dummies or so. Inventing new lines to explain something that doesn't need any explanation.
 
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Interesting. Of course, he could have been viewing Jane as a sort of common-law wife and using poetic license. Then again, you knew that, but we can't assume that everyone else does. :rolleyes:
 

mjp

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