In working with the prose, I am coming across more and more examples of the following: the first is original LAFP "Notes" and version in South of No North as "Hit Man". Here the evidence is incontrovertible: no way Buk revised these AFTER they appeared in the Freep. Note the changes in word choice and removal of the best lines. Vanished is: "The sex was really secondary; it was the capturing of the soul that was needed. Love was the babytalk of idiots."