Discipline of haiku is the right way to phrase it,
I had to write some at University....
Reminds me of Buk when I think about it now.
I had a bitch of a time when I would try so hard to make it look so simple->
5 again. (I think?!) Then I found->
When I stop trying
The words arrive eagerly,
Wanting to be pet.
Yeah, I know,........
(But it's off the fly).
Anyway, it just reminds me of how Buk mastered that easy flow of words
That can be so confoundingly difficult to achieve when you try so hard.
(see most of my posts ;) )
Yet draws the critics' (most of them) ire.
And it is funny,
How he hated the constraints of 'poetry'
And here I am comparing his writing to the rigid structure of Haiku.
(BTW, I read in some thread (can't find it now) that Buk would have hated this forum... IMO you're right on, and that's funny too)