"The Editor" (or The Typist?) had changed a couple of nouns ("determination" instead of "velocity" and "density" instead of "monotony", "a total area" changed to "total areas"), and he threw out a couple of words he considered redundant, toyed with punctuation a little bit... the usual stuff.
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