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very good read, rjwink. i enjoyed it very much.

i like the kinks lyrics that you quoted too. so, you an elliott smith fan? you mentioned figure 8, which is one of my all time faves(by him or anyone else)...
 
It's a good read for sure. Keep going, Richard.

And Elliott Smith, I just love his Music & Lyrics.
 
I like it. You captured my attention and maintained it, so that says a ton. Reminds me a little in parts of a book I read about a mailman.

I liked this poem:

Memoirs of an I.T. Girl... the things I do for you

By Cat

this girl had a gorgeous tattoo
of a peacock
on her right shoulder blade.
It was new
and she was pontificating
on hygiene
and craftsmanship
when I walked into the cafeteria -
this, of course,
made it hideous
and so i turned away
before her voice got
any more inclusive.
i'm thinking
someone thought
she paid too much...
the bird was pretentious
and empty faced.
its pose was dramatic
victorious even
as if her body were
iwo jima and its ultra violet
green plumage
so erect and inaccessible
were a spray
of american flags.
i'd also like
to pounce on her back
and carve it out with a spork. we must
save the idiots
from themselves
whenever it is within
our power.

g
 
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Good stuff, Richard. Two points:

1. You clock in at 5:30 AM? :eek:

2. "He's on tour with Motorhead" made me laugh out loud.

Well done. Keep goin' indeed; you've got something here for sure.
 
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very good read, rjwink. i enjoyed it very much.
i like the kinks lyrics that you quoted too. so, you an elliott smith fan?

big time, Elliott is right up there with Dylan in my opinion



I liked this poem:

Memoirs of an I.T. Girl... the things I do for you

By Cat

Yeah Cat is a really cool writer, I have only read a couple of her poems, she's real enigmatic

Good stuff, Richard. Two points:

1. You clock in at 5:30 AM? :eek:

sadly, i'm so zombified I cannot taste my branflakes. last week I poured apple juice over them instead of milk
 
apple juice? ha! that reminds me of the seinfeld when kramer pours tomato juice on his cereal because the light from the kenny rogers roasters chicken place is keeping him up.

re: elliott smith, i agree with you 100%. in my very humble opinion, he comes in somewhere between lennon, mccartney, ray davies and dylan.
 

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