Huh. I would have never guessed.The only reason I came on here was to get my poems/stories out to more people.
You sure know a lot about forums. You know, for someone who has to "force" themselves to go on the Internet (and post in forums and start blogs, etc.).On every forum, of every topic, there's always the top 5 or 10 posters, that take it upon themselves to cut people down, correct everyone, and pronounce themselves as judges of whatever topic the forum regards.
You are angry about our impression of you, but all we have to go on is what you give us. You gave us a cliche.I don't care if you think I'm this Fonze-character that thinks he's the next Bukowski. That's great, awesome, go with that. Believe it.
You mean 'a part of'. Apart means to separate. 'A part of' is inclusive.So if I was already apart of
You joined and participated. I guess that makes you one of the "elite."your 'elite' club...
Then why isn't it okay for me to hate you?I hate most writers.
Incorrect use of a comma.I guess, I was wrong.
Funny, that's what I call him too.JOHN FUCKING MARTIN
Can I get you a hankie to weep into, bitch?I'm a working class single-dad, with no car, a mountain of debt to climb over, a back injury that drives me to the brink of madness, and in general a tough road in life.
Why didn't you say you were sitting on such an impressive body of work?Everyday I'm posting another poem. I have a stack of over 80 now
Huh? You said you, "wrote...on my porch, in the ghetto and in the call centers." Was that a lie? Suddenly you have a fancy, college-boy garage to write in? Like some sort of writer's studio? What an elitist!I'll be in the garage and with my mean machine.
I did. I didn't like them. I think what you meant to say here is that you wanted people to tell you they were great.I wanted people to read my poems.
You mean Fonzie.You're the ones that started calling me 'Fonze'
The period goes inside the quotation marks.& 'Ponyboy'.
Look up "persona." (<--see where the period goes?)This isn't a persona...
Are you sure you wanted to use a question mark there? It seems like a statement.Do me a favor and let me know if you find any other grammatical or punctuation errors in anything I've typed on here?
Yes, to point out how stupid they are.There's a reason you people sit on a message board all day correcting others.
I thought about it, and I think it means I'm smarter than you.Think about what that is and what it means about you.