the bizarre word play Martinelli learned from Ezra Pound...
Oh,
he's responsible for that beatnik claptrap? Far from bizarre wordplay, that dropping of vowels, etc., is just moronification (see there,
that's wordplay! ;)). Nothing particularly interesting or inventive about it. In my ever-humble opinion. But I'm uneducated, and never sucked Ezra Pound's cock or gave Kerouac a sponge bath, so what do I know.
But that's the reason those letters ring false to me. Bukowski was just trying to get laid (which seemed to be the driving force behind almost all of his correspondence with women), and he looks like an asshole doing it. If they had interspersed some of those letters in the other letter collections it would be more obvious. They would stick out like the sore thumbs they are.
Smug letters written by a couple of people who are very impressed with themselves. They left me very cold, which is the opposite of what I want or expect from a book with Bukowski's name on the cover. Is it interesting to see that pandering side of him? Sure. Doesn't make it any less unpleasant though. I have it, I've read it, but I would never voluntarily read it again. I didn't even buy a hardcover copy.
I think the problem with the Martinelli and Purdy books is that the other letter books are there to compare them to, and they both fall far short of the fire on display in the other collections.