it's called "Love Is A Piece Of Paper Torn To Bits". and I'm digging to understand some of it (reminding you that I have the Portuguese as my native language):
"nobody to grab sail... and the N. wester ripped the sheets like toenails
and we pitched like crazy" so it was a ship that fucked up? like titanic sort of?
"and all the time in the corner
some punk had a drunken slut (my wife)
and was pumping away" what the hell the punk
was doing with bukowski's lady? is that what
pumping away means? fikkofikko?
...sorry about that, but:
"and took the thing
and heaved it
over
the side."
the thing was the cat?
shit my fucking old fellas... I don't like to talk about poetry, but your language is hard to get it. they dance to much in some ways that confuse my dementic head. what sucks most: poetry here is rhymed and stinky. so it's ok to talk about this whiteheads?
with LuV.
"nobody to grab sail... and the N. wester ripped the sheets like toenails
and we pitched like crazy" so it was a ship that fucked up? like titanic sort of?
"and all the time in the corner
some punk had a drunken slut (my wife)
and was pumping away" what the hell the punk
was doing with bukowski's lady? is that what
pumping away means? fikkofikko?
...sorry about that, but:
"and took the thing
and heaved it
over
the side."
the thing was the cat?
shit my fucking old fellas... I don't like to talk about poetry, but your language is hard to get it. they dance to much in some ways that confuse my dementic head. what sucks most: poetry here is rhymed and stinky. so it's ok to talk about this whiteheads?
with LuV.