according to the database, the poem 'Sun Coming Down' was first printed in Harlequin - Vol. 2 - No. 1 - Page 11 - 1957 and then never again until after Hank's death.
From everything we know, I find it likely, that these posthumous versions have been 'changed'.
To verify this, we'd need a copy...
Here are scans of The Eight Pager vol. 1 no. 3, edited by D.r. Wagner (NY: press : today : niagara, 1966)
The Stupid Are Best At The Cruelties:
The Sex-Obsessed Ladies Walking By Me After Work
mjp, Hope there's no problem in posting this transcript. Seasons Greetings to All
All Right, So Camus Had to Give Speeches before the Academies and Get His Ass Killed in a Car-Wreck
met this guy, somewhere, hell his eyes looked like a madman's
This is from 1972, vol. 1, no. 1 of Bachy, a perfect bound mag/book put out by Papa Bach bookstore in Los Angeles. Bachy was short lived, and this poem has not been published anywhere else.
Measurements From the Creation Coffin:
the ability to suffer and endure -
that's nobility, friend -