Poem comparisons (7 Viewers)

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Mostly comparing the posthumous publications to manuscript versions, for reasons that should become apparent after you read a few of these.
roni
What about 'Roll the Dice'?
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34
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PhillyDave
PhillyDave
mjp
note for my wall
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28
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4K
gabilager
gabilager
mjp
Dirty, vulgar poem (1 Viewer)
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23
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5K
hoochmonkey9
hoochmonkey9
mjp
Another Day/Big Grey Balloon Things, Heavy
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22
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4K
Rekrab
Rekrab
mjp
So you want to be a writer?
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19
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3K
LickTheStar
LickTheStar
mjp
Regrets of a sort
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19
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3K
ROC
ROC
David
My Father And The Bum (1 Viewer)
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16
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5K
roni
roni
cirerita
"fog" (1st and 2nd drafts)
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15
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3K
james
james
mjp
The Shit Shits (1 Viewer)
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14
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4K
Mark Rogers
Mark Rogers
mjp
It Sucks/Runaway Inflation
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13
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3K
Erik
Erik
roni
'Sun Coming Down'
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11
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4K
Darmochwal
D
mjp
Does this make sense?
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11
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3K
PhillyDave
PhillyDave
mjp
self-inflicted
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10
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3K
mjp
mjp
Digney in Burnaby
prescience
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9
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2K
Bukfan
Bukfan
mjp
Darlings of the Word (and removing references to drinking)
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8
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2K
mjp
mjp
Pogue Mahone
Oro madre - vol. 2, no. 3/4 - 1984: here i am
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8
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3K
mjp
mjp
roni
I cannot stand tears
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8
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4K
mjp
mjp
David
dead (1 Viewer)
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7
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3K
d gray
d gray
skiroomalum
Burning Typescript (1 Viewer)
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7
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2K
Olaf
Olaf
mjp
husk
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6
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3K
Purple Stickpin
Purple Stickpin
mjp
To Weep In Her Hair
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6
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3K
Andreas
Andreas
nymark
on being recognized
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5
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3K
hank solo
hank solo
Ponder
weep
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5
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2K
Purple Stickpin
Purple Stickpin
mjp
my big night on the town
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5
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2K
PhillyDave
PhillyDave
mjp
Good Show
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4
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2K
mjp
mjp
David
"AT&T"/Purr Version, Martinized, Scott Harrison
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4
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2K
roni
roni
David
"Heat", Magazine #5, 1972/The People Look Like Flowers at Last
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4
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3K
Hosh
Hosh
David
Bloody Martinization of a small classic gem
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4
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3K
Rekrab
Rekrab
David
Fugs: Having the flu with nothing else to do
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3
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2K
mjp
mjp
zobraks
One for the Shoeshine Man (1 Viewer)
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3
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2K
mjp
mjp
mjp
Bright boy
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3
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2K
Erik
Erik
mjp
I'm a failure
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3
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2K
Hosh
Hosh
mjp
For The Foxes, The Defamers, The Tap Dancers, And The Dreamers Of Ballet
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3
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2K
David
David
Ponder
The Empties & Empties
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3
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2K
hank solo
hank solo
mjp
Oops...
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3
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2K
Purple Stickpin
Purple Stickpin
David
Age - Ole 1 - 1964
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3
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3K
mjp
mjp
mjp
basic
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3
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2K
PhillyDave
PhillyDave
marina del rey
neither Shakespeare or Mickey Spillane
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2
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Short Bus
Short Bus
David
"the riots" from 1992 changed to "riots" 2003
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2
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Black Swan
Black Swan
David
A Poem For The Swingers, A Poem For The Playgirls Of The Universe
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2
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3K
mjp
mjp
mjp
Secret Laughter Shining (1 Viewer)
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2
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2K
Black Swan
Black Swan
mjp
Zero/ground zero
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2
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PhillyDave
PhillyDave
mjp
The perfect silence
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2
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2K
mjp
mjp
mjp
The condition
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2
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2K
Hosh
Hosh
mjp
giving thanks
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2
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3K
Jaqdaw
Jaqdaw
mjp
Gallery
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1
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marina del rey
marina del rey
mjp
Disgusting
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1
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1K
Bukfan
Bukfan
Ponder
CARLTON WAY OFF OF WESTERN
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1
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1K
mjp
mjp
mjp
The New Revolution
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1
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Gerard K H Love
Gerard K H Love
mjp
the media
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1
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Erik
Erik
mjp
You Write Many Poems About Death - Does this qualify as irony?
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1
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Ponder
Ponder
nymark
12,000 Dollars In 3 Months...
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1
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3K
mjp
mjp
mjp
fingernails
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1
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1K
d gray
d gray
Ponder
like a movie
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0
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2K
Ponder
Ponder
mjp
the faithful wife
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0
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1K
mjp
mjp
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